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©2008-2009 =Shinerai
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I used to do an annual shinrun animation, but I didn't do one this year. However with shin's new design, people wanted to see what it'd look like and i wanted to animate it! So here it is. He has assfeathers now. I like them. They're feathers, not a tail.

sorry for the shoddy color, i had an hour and 15 mins to do it

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oops uploaded the wrong one. he's in color now

Critiques


:iconkattermerang:
Its a very nice animation with alot of good qualities to it.

I can only say a few things that would make it better rather then point out mistakes which it has very few of:D

When the front paws come up to there furthest point just before they flick out to the longest stance you might want to add a frame because it goes to quickly into that position. It needs another key just to give it more:)

I would give it more drag and alot more squash because the guy in my opinion looks light when a little more squash and stretch would be nice to give him a more solid look. So bring his whole body down and up and more bend in the front legs. It just gives animations weight when you do that:)

The next bit is really only a personal choice but in my opinion I would make the head flop back a bit more when it is going down just because then when the feet have contact with the ground the head looks like its following on from this.

I think its a very nice running animation thats just so fun to look at but I hope this helps:)
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:icondanji-isthmus:
Wow that is so smooth. I think it looks great! X3

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:iconblackpinkgoldfish:
wow!

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:iconfma-addict:
pretty cool.

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:iconsenraikin:
I love how realistic Shin looks when he runs. Your anatomy skills are great. ^^ I just had one question. On the new Shin's reference sheet, you said the old Shin wasn't going anywhere. So, what are you going to do with that design. Sorry for being nosey.
:iconexuitirteiss:
Wow shin good job with this very wicked.

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:icongryphonworks:
Great animation, and I really like Shin's new design!
:icontoxxictheinsane:
Awesome OuO <3333 so fluid
:iconflygonheart:
Oh woaw I was surfing on DA and I saw "1 deviation"
Oh my gosh, that's the first time I see an animation from you. Yeah he has assfeathers XD
1h15 to do it. That's awesome :)

I love your art :D

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:iconzhiibe:
ruuun shin :0
i like it o.o looks awesome :'D

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YES i make the floating balls xD
COMISSIONS~

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:iconsenaru:
8D that is so awesome Shin~ x3

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