Run, Shin 2010 WIP2

Description

So some time during this/last week, I edited my Shinerai Run animation that I got so much feedback on. I really appreciate all the critique you guys gave me! Here are a couple edits I made.

- added 4 frames, hopefully more fluid now. (16 total frames)
- increased frame rate, now he doesn't run so slow.
- hopefully fixed the tracking of his back feet, now they shouldn't look like they're shaking
- hopefully fixed his head swing a little so he looks more natural.
- tried to fix the changing in length of the tail pinions.
- earring no longer moves up and down the ear, lol.

I tried to make his back arch and curve a little more with his run and attempted to show more weight in his knees. I increased the distance of which his back feet are on the ground, that way he gets more thrust. I'm aware some of his muscles jump around, but I'm really not concerned about it since I'll be fixing it when I eventually go to shade it or something. I took all of your critiques into heart and I tried really hard to fix them. I hope it looks better now. Sorry to those of you who used your big animator-terms that I didn't know, since I haven't been in a class or anything. I really appreciate everyone who took the time to explain the big words to me and give me a couple tips. Thanks!

Also made the BG a little brighter and lines a little darker so you could see better. I drew all the frames in Photoshop CS and saved them as JPEGs. I then imported all the frames into Flash and set it on a loop.

Details

Materials.
Photoshop 7
Adobe Flash

Original Dimensions.
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Time Spent.
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Copyright

Art © Shinerai that's me!