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Thanks for your feedback, hon c:
I think what confused me at first was the far fin seems to have one less "large" spine than the near one (I'm assuming it's foreshortened out of view and my brain can't make sense of it yet), and that combined with the line of scales on the tail there twisting in a way that sort of makes it look like they're dorsal when they're really not.
Man I hope my replies make sense. I'd write more but this message alone took a while just to compose, and it's late already
Your replies make perfect sense xD I need to work more on making my drawings make more sense is all. I very much appreciate your feedback, hon, because without it, it'd be harder to improve
Haha sometimes I feel like my sentences come out as run-ons.
Don't be silly, you've already done quite an amazing job! It's hard to depict a form with just lineart (I know, we had to draw a bicycle in drawing class using just contours v_v), and I'm sure my tired brain would have grasped it better had the commissioner requested shading.
Office jobs are alright. Personally, I'd love to be in an office like 2 days a week and work from home the rest of the time
this is particularly nice!